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A special friendship seal

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A special friendship's seal

Dawn was a young trainer but she was already very good too.
she had succeeded to catch a latios and she was very proud of it.
But latios wasn't agree: when she freed it from its pokeball, it just turned back her and ignored all the orders that Dawn asked.
she tried to train it with all means, but it was ever the same.
After some ages, she took a terribly decision: she would free it because to have a pokemon that wasn't happy with her was useless.
So she gone in a far large prairie and let it come out from its pokeball: it, as its usual, turned back her.
"latios," she started sadly :" when I catch you, I hoped that we could become friends" at this words, latios turned toward her  and said a "laaati?" like it want to asked something.
"but after all this ages I couldn't have even your respect" continued Dawn trying to hold her tears in vain "so I think that if you aren't happy to have me as your trainer, I have only to do this!" and saying that, she dropped the latios's pokeball on the ground and destroyed it with a stomp.
"laaaaaaaaaaaaa!" groaned  latios sadly but Dawn shouted at it crying "well, you are free now, go away!"
And latios, with its head down, flown away.
After that, she went back at her home and cried for some hours for the lost pokemon.
Some days later she was at home and she was sleeping in her bad, when she heard a noise from out of her room.
"thieves?" he thinked and she started to get up, but suddenly, the door of her room opened and a shadow come in to her.
"who or what are you?" shouted Dawn and switched on the lights.
she couldn't believe at her eyes: a latios, HER latios, was floating over her bed, and it was looking at her.
"l-l-latios? Are you come back?" she said shocked, latios nodded still watching she with its red eyes.
"but… why??? You-you never listen me when you was mine!" she said.  At this point, latios' eye glowed and she felt a strange felling in her mind, like if she was fall in trance, and she heard the words than latios said to her telepathically :"that's right, Dawn, but I think I was wrong on you".
"oh, I didn't know than you can do this! But… what do you mean?" answered Dawn trying to understood what was happening to her :"don't you remember than I'm a psytic pokemon? Well, I mean that from when you have caught me, I thinked that you wanted to have me just as a trophy to show to other for exalt yourself." Answered latios.
"but… you was wrong! I've caught you because you are my favorite pokemon, and I wanted to have you as a friend, not like "a trophy" how you said!" she answered starting to cry :"well, I had understood it partly only from your words and your attitudes when you released me: only for this I'm come back. But after that you said now, and that I see in your mind, I'm sure that your words are real" answered latios :"do you want me for your pokemon again?" answered latios with its eyes shining.
"yes, I want" answered Dawn happy :"excellent!" said latios happy too :"but before you catch me again, I want to give you something that will let you understood me easier" it said with a smile.
"what is it?" asked Dawn curiously :"don't worry, I promise that I won't hurt you" it said and its eyes glowed again, and a light wrapped all Dan's body
"hey, what are you doing at me?" he said while red feathers started to cover his hands :"I'm giving you a very special present that will seals our friendship forever" said latios while the red covered all dawn's body except for her up-arm, her back, her up-breast and her head than became white.
"wait, are you turning me into a Latias?" asked she while a red triangle appeared on her head and another blue smaller appeared on her breast.
"well, something like that, but you will conserve all your human features with some additions" answered latios while her nails became claws, her face pushed out make a pointy muzzle, her nose vanished, her eyes became gold and her ears became two ornaments on the top on her head.
"I'm feeling weird, but I think that something is missed here" said her looking at her back.
"don't worry" said it with its voice :" you are not finished yet!"
After that, she felt a light pain in her back: two bumps appeared on her back and grew since to become a pair of angled and pointy wings, like latios's wings, but red and a bit big.
"oh, these was that I mean!" she gasped stroking her new wings :"perfect, you are fully complete! Do you like it?" asked latios smiling.
"let me see what did you do entirely" asked she smiling too and got off of her bed, discovered that, despite that she now had her new wings, she felt herself very light as she never felt in her life, and went to see her new look in her mirror.
"wow! You make a very good job! Thank you!" she said happiness while she gazed her new body.
"eh eh, nice to see that you like it" said latios laughing.
"hey!" said she dubiously:" do you think that these work?" asked dawn pointing at her wings.
"of course. why don't you try?" said latios grinning.
She try to make a small jump, and she remained with her feet at some inch over the ground.
"i-I can fly???" She turned back to face latios, a look of pure joy and delight beginning to spread across her face. "I can fly!"  shouted her euphoric and darted out from the window in the night, followed from latios.
She makes some spins and somersaults in the air: she never felt so happy in all her life!
After that she calm down, she stopped in the air and looked at latios:" thank you, thank you very much! This is the best gift that you can make at me! But… why did you have done a so beautiful job on me?" asked Dawn returning in her room :" because I don't want to have any misunderstanding with you at all, my master: now we can see ours mind each other so" and his eyes glowed light blue.
She looked in its eyes and saw all its things :" ohh! With this, it will impossible to do not understand each other!" she said smiling :"and now? What do you want to do?" asked she.
"What? Don't you want to become the best trainer ever?" said latios grinning.
And from that day, dawn and her latios became one of the best team ever: all that they known her nicknamed her "the Latias-girl" and she never thinked to separate for her Latios.

The end
this is my first atro pokemon tf story

i hope you like this :D
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Garner4444's avatar
Okay first things first. I like it. But there are severely repetitive errors in your story. You use was a lot even though were is correct instead. And the last sentence confuses me.